Talk:Thorfinn the Mighty/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
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2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (0.0% is highest)
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
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5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y
Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

which were written down long after the time of the events in his life they record I suggest you change this to which created long after the events of his life they record.

We know roughly when the saga was first written down, but unfortunately we have no idea when the oral material it records was first created. Ben Mac Dui 11:07, 24 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

On the last day of the feast Thorkel was supposed to travel with Einar for the reciprocal event but the former's spies reported that ambushes were in place en route. suggest On the last day of the feast Thorkel was supposed to travel with Einar for the reciprocal event, however his spies reported to him that ambushes had been prepared against him along his route.

Done.

ended with Karl defeated and fugitive or dead. suggest ended with Karl either being killed or forced to flee.

Done.

That is all my comments, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:06, 23 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for the review & these comments. Ben Mac Dui 11:07, 24 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]