Talk:Thomas Crump/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:08, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
My goal is to get to 250 GA reviews by the end of the year, I believe this one will be #243. Hog Farm Bacon 16:08, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Lead
- Maybe move the links for Herefordshire/Shropshire and Somerset up to the first mentions?
- Additionally, are there links for runs and innings in cricket? I don't know cricket, but I'm a big baseball fan, and runs and innings have different meanings in baseball. Also, very few Americans seem to have a solid understanding of how cricket works, much as how the Scandinavian foreign exchange student my high school had one year thought it was weird that Americans played a form of football where if you don't hurt yourself, you're not trying hard enough
- Body
- Link vicar? Not a particularly common term in America
Didn't see the batting handedness in the body, but it's supported by the source in the infobox, so that's fine.
And none of this is significant to justify placing this on hold. Hard as I try, there's nothing I can find here that stands against the GA criteria. I'm going to pass this one without placing on hold, which is something that doesn't happen very often, so congrats. I do have one friendly favor to ask of you though, if you don't mind and the discussion is still up: I'd like some input here. Hog Farm Bacon 21:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)