Talk:Thinking 'Bout You (Dua Lipa song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start this review tomorrow; hopefully it does not get in the way of your schedule with the other review, as I can see that one has not been completed... --K. Peake 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
"wrote the song with Adam Argyle while" → "co-wrote the song with Adam Argyle, while" because a comma is needed before while in British English for instances like this
I would recommend a comma either before through or as in the release sentence since it reads like a bit of a run-on currently
Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
Wikilink acoustic guitar
"using weed, alcohol" → "confessing to using weed, alcohol"
"Commercially, the song charted" → "Commercially, "Thinking 'Bout You" charted"
Include the respective positions on the charts
Mention that the song received the video in February 2017
"A remix by" → "A remix of the song by" to specify so it doesn't sound like you mean a live remix

Done

Background and composition

Audio sample text looks good, but you should wikilink acoustic guitar nevertheless!
There is no background info about how any of the collaborators became involved with Lipa; I would suggest mentioning that Koz contributed produced numerous tracks on the album
"and Adam Argyle with" → "and Adam Argyle, with" for correct separation of the roles to avoid confusion
Wikilink synthesizer
Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
"was handled by" → "were both handled by"
""Thinking 'Bout You" is an" → "Musically, "Thinking 'Bout You" is an"
Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
Swap the order of the Idolator and iTunes Store refs per the prose
"is composed in ⁴
₄ time" → "is composed in the time signature of ⁴
₄ time"
Pipe groove to Groove (music)
Wikilink acoustic guitar
Wikilink bluesy
Pipe range to Vocal range
Wikilink lament
"evoking desperation in" → "while evoking desperation in"

Done

Release and promotion

Add the word "accounts" after SoundCloud and YouTube
[15] does not source the song as being among the ones performed by her at Eurosonic Noorderslag
- Removed. LOVI 33 22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"she performed it on" → "she performed the song on"
Remove comma after independent record label
"It serves as the" → "It served as the"
Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
"Room for 2" being the previous promo single is unsourced
- Added in source. LOVI 33 22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
You can split the music video into a third para of its own to separate from release/performances, as there is enough info
"in April of that year alongside" → "in April 2017 alongside one of"
"the setlists for the singer's Self-Titled Tour in 2017 and 2018." → "the setlist for the singer's Self-Titled Tour, which ran from 2017 to 2018."
Remove wikilink on New Zealand and mention that the performance was for Warner Music New Zealand

Done

Reception

"Lipa's versatility saying" → "Lipa's versatility, saying"
"that it shows her" → "that the song shows Lipa's"
Wikilink Tanqueray
"thought it is more of a" → "thought the song is of a more"
"but also it's clearest giving one" → "but also among its clearest due to giving one"
"opted that the song" → "opined that the song" because this is not a specific choice

Done

Track listings

Good

Credits and personnel

Wikilink Dua Lipa

Done

Charts

Good

Release history

Good

References

Copyvio score looks great at 19.4%!!!
Top job with the archiving; shame I can't replicate that for any of my articles right now due to the tool being down
Cite 3VOOR12 as publisher instead for ref 15
Remove WBUR-FM from ref 20
Pipe Warner Music New Zealand to Warner Music Australasia on ref 30

Done

External links

Good

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:09, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review Kyle Peake! I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. LOVI 33 22:53, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33 ✓ Pass now, great to wake up to your response here in the UK and everything is checked! --K. Peake 06:36, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]