Talk:Thinkin Bout You (Frank Ocean song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox

Information is needed in the article to verify that "quiet storm" is one of the genres of the song

You're right, I've removed it.

Lead

...just out of his reach and the turmoil that brings... → Change "brings" to "ensues"

Done

...video directed by visual art group High5Collective released on September 15... → Specify year this occurred

Done

Ocean performed Ocean performed the track during his seven show tour... → Get rid of the first "Ocean performed"

Copy editing error, done.

Background

At a listening part in 2012, it was confirmed that the track would appear on Ocean's Channel Orange.[6] → Change "part" to "party"

Composition

According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 20.1 seconds and is currently 25 seconds)

Reception

No issues

Promotion

No issues

Chart

Fix the table so that it is closed

Done?

References

References 3, 6, 8 → Put publisher in
Reference 5 → "iTunes Store" needs to be wiki-linked and should not be italicized
References 10, 25 → "MTV" should not be italicized
References 20, 21 → "Rolling Stone" and "Wenner Media" should not be italicized
Reference 26 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media"

All done?

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues and reference formatting errors that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 03:05, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 05:01, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]