Talk:Thing-Fish/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:59, 5 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article. The very first thing is that the bare URLs need to be fixed and turned into citations. Do that while I look through the article over the next couple days. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:59, 5 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I just noticed the main writer was a sockpuppet, so the review's not going to be responded to. Nonetheless, here's some comments:

As noted above, the bare URLs have to be fixed.
"Harry presented a homosexual boy, Rhonda" as a
The prose as a whole isn't too bad, but it does get quote-heavy at times.
The reception section doesn't note much why it wasn't liked originally.
The Google books sources need page numbers, and if they aren't free view then they shouldn't be linked.

The article's not too bad; if an independent non-sockpuppet goes through the article it could become a GA without too much effort. Until then, the article fails. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:13, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]