Talk:Thierry Le Luron

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Cleanup-rewrite

As a native French speaker, I can see a large part was probably translated word-for-word from fr.wikipedia. Among other problems:

Proper names are translated, including translating his own last name "Le Luron" to "The Tomboy", the band name to "Les rats crevés" to "The Dead Rats", the TV show names "Jeu de la chance" and "Télé Dimanche" to "Game of Chance" and "TV Sunday", the theater name "l’Échelle de Jacob" to "Jacob's Ladder", his album name "Le Ministère patraque" to "The Woozy Ministry". All of these are also redlinks.
Frenchims: "imitation" instead of "impersonator", "viewers" instead of "attendees",...
Sentences that make no sense "He performed his first sketches in the same issue", "From de Gaulle to Mitterrand at the Marigny Theatre (January-December 1983), The Tomboy went to the Théâtre du Gymnase Marie Bell (November 1984 – March 1986)", "an individual with no particular equities", "singing and blackmailing the public's ignorance", and many others.
Outright wrong information: "On 25 September 1985, he got married to Micheal Vicenty". It was a wedding parody, and it was with Coluche (which is mentioned later in the article in a sentence that makes no sense either). "A few weeks later he gave birth to his son". Le Luron never had any children. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.236.58.6 (talk) 07:19, 25 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]