Talk:Therion (band)/GA1

GA Review

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This article is decent but needs some work to reach good article status. Issues include:

Too much information is unreferenced, including:
- "Secret of the Runes (2001—2004)" section
- Most of "Lemuria & Sirius B (2004—2006)" section
- "Gothic Kabbalah (2006—2007)" section
- "Symbols" section
A lot of the information uses the biography from the band's official website, which is a primary source. Secondary sources should be used.
Resolve the [citation needed] template
Image:Bells of Doom.jpg should not be in this article; it only belongs in the album article
Image:Therion beyond.jpg needs its image license improved for this article
ProgPower Festival leads to a disambiguation page
There are two dead links in the references
References in non-English languages—such as Swedish—need to be marked as such
Prose needs to be cleaned up
"However, band's name is also taken as homage" — "However, the band's name is a homage"
what is "audience successful"? in any case, needs a dash in between
"highly influenced" – shouldn't just "influenced" be enough?
The above prose issues come from the article's lead. I suggest copyediting the rest of the article.

Please keep this page updated on the article's progress. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 03:56, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Issues have not been resolved, therefore this article has failed its good article nomination. Gary King (talk) 18:06, 10 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]