Talk:The Woman Hater (1910 Thanhouser film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 10:48, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I should have this to you soon ☠ Jaguar ☠ 10:48, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- The could be expanded a little to summarise the article better and comply per WP:LEAD. Could you mention something about its production and release? A little should do
- "The film was released on June 14, 1910, but is not know to have been reviewed" - known
- "The single reel drama, approximately 1000 feet in length" - this could be converted into metres using the conversion template
- "It was the Powers film that was rediscovered in New Zealand in 2010" - is this referring to the other Woman Hater film?
References
[edit]Close - promoted
[edit]I couldn't find anything that would disrupt this review so after looking through it again I can tell that this article stays faithful to its references. The prose is generally good although this article would benefit from clarifying the above comments, but I see nothing major that would constitute putting this on hold. 
☠ Jaguar ☠ 15:43, 11 April 2015 (UTC)