Talk:The Witness (2016 video game)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:33, 4 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have this finished soon. JAGUAR 21:33, 4 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"The Witness received widespread acclaim from critics, who praised the difficult, but surmountable puzzles and the game's art and setting" - the last sentence of the lead looks a bit disjointed. Can you merge it in another paragraph? Altinatevly, you could expand this sentence a little and mention what critics liked/disliked about various aspects of the game
"The final game has more than 650 puzzles, which Jonathan Blow estimates" - link Jonathan Blow here
"Throughout the island are stations with audio recordings that provide insightful quotes for the player, from persons such as" - why not just people? Feel free to ignore
"and feared that he would "fall back to square one", his state before the success of Braid, should it fail." - he stated?
"He considers his approach the "anti-Nintendo"" - not sure if I'm looking at this wrong way, but it would read fine without the "the" here
"While The Witness would be considered an indie game due to the lack of funding or support from a major publisher" - considered by who? The developers themselves?
I noticed that US Gamer isn't in the review table?
No dead links
No dab links

This is an excellent article. Once all of the minor issues are out of the way, then you can have a GA. It is well written, comprehensive and enjoyable to read. This is pretty close to FA standard! JAGUAR 19:38, 5 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

All of these issues should be resolved now. Lordtobi (✉) 18:41, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! This looks good to go now.

JAGUAR 17:18, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]