Talk:The Witch Way/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk ^(talk) 14:21, 1 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The logo is inappropriate use of a fair use logo. However, because it only consists of text, it is not eligible for copyright and I have moved it to the Commons. Since it is no longer a fair use image, it can be used freely (within the permits of a trademark).
There are so many Manchesters and Nelsons that the country has to be specified. For a moment I wondered if the route was in British Columbia, Canada.
Boldface X43, X44 and Timesaver.
Don't repeat links from the lead to the body.
The award section is too short for a stand-alone section, so I move it to the history section. Award section for a single award are also broderline POV issues.
Avoid single-sentence paragraphs, such as in variants.
Ref 21 was dead, but I found the new url.
Ref 17 needs to be formatted with a publisher or author, a date and/or an accessdate.

Fix ref 17 and the article will pass (I fixed the rest). Arsenikk ^(talk) 14:21, 1 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Thanks for sorting the other problems. Alzarian16 (talk) 14:35, 1 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]