Talk:The Wild and the Innocent (Millennium)/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 16:04, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: Who is Waterson? Is this another name for Jim Gilroy? Waterson just pops out of nowhere
That's really the only issues I can find, but it is a confusing one at that. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:12, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to look at this. Yeah, Waterson is Gilroy. The plot already had "Records for the car show it to be registered to Gilroy, but Watts points out that Gilroy is a known alias of Jake Waterson, a serial rapist who who murdered three women several years earlier before disappearing", but I've expanded that a little to be more clear about it. GRAPPLE X 03:23, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
- Alright, that makes more sense. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:05, 12 March 2012 (UTC)