Talk:The Unforgiving

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Metal

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Netherlands

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The concept

The concept may be somewhat blurry at the moment, especially to a common editor not familiar with the band or the album/project. I tried to make it as clear as possible and include whatever information I could (well sourced, I believe), but please have patience if it seem blurry, and don't edit it all out. There is enough information to make a big article, but let's not make it a fuzzy one. Quispiam (talk) 21:17, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've made some grammatical changes to the Concept section as some of it was very difficult to understand. I kept in all the information I could make it and do apologise if I've missed anything. I also want to suggest that the two sections (Early Ideas and Final Concept) be melded together as the first section has so much information that it is now overshadowing the latter.--Nerdtrap (talk) 16:24, 18 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Correction

Corrected track title "Shot In The Dark" in the track listing.--93.97.168.109 (talk) 10:04, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]