Talk:The Trumpet-Major

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"In this setting, in which he explores the subversive effects and nature of ordinary human beings such when desire and conflicting loyalties on the systemized versions of history." This isn't grammatically correct. The Themes section could do with a re-write. 80.41.221.35 (talk) 18:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]