Talk:The Terrorists of Iraq/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 10:52, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:52, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

• The external link in footnote 26 is dead.
• The "Further reading" section uses Harvard anchors, but the citations are not set up to point to them; this is not really a references section, rather a list of books by Nance, so use "ref=none" to disable the Harvard anchors. Are all these books relevant to this article? The Plot to Hack America appears unrelated, for example.
• a peaceful resolution to the nuclear issue with the country is worthy of seeing if it can come to fruition: clumsy phrasing.
• Under a similar title without the denotation of years range: confusing; just give the revised title.
• The list of "See also" is very long; some of these could probably be cut. It should be limited to articles that are directly related to the topic of this article but not linked; why do we need a link to Arab Spring, for example?

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:23, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Sagecandor, are you planning to work on this? If not I'll fail the article in another week. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:12, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

I'll work on this tomorrow. Bennv3771 (talk) 18:20, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

Mike Christie Ok, I think I've addressed the above issues. Let me know if more improvements are still needed. Thanks. Bennv3771 (talk) 09:07, 24 February 2018 (UTC)

I think we're there. Promoting. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:03, 24 February 2018 (UTC)