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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 06:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article sometime tomorrow. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:11, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "However, Annie soon begins to interfere too much and this frustrates" I'd tweak to 'much, which frustrates'
- Reception would probably be a better section title than Release, since that's more what it's about.
- Changed to "Release and reception". Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- "finishing before new episodes of" finishing ahead of sounds better in this context.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:04, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 00:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:56, 18 December 2011 (UTC)