Talk:The Stranger (Ingrid Andress song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:51, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this review today! --K. Peake 07:51, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• The lengths are not sourced anywhere in the body
  • See under track listing. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
• Andress → Ingrid Andress in the infobox producers parameter, as this is not a track listing
  • Could you explain this a bit more? From what I've seen, there are song articles who use the full name if the producer is also a songwriter, and some who only use the surname if said producer is also a songwriter. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
• Add a comma after debut studio album
• "The track was written by" → "The song was written by" to be consistent
• "was handled by Andress and" → "was handled by it and"
  • I said "the former" as it would sound a bit weird to refer to Andress as "it". Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
• "on February 4, 2017 for" → "on February 4, 2017, for"
• "from Lady Like in" → "from the album in"
• "a lost romance. Andress was inspired to write the track" → "a lost romance and Andress was inspired to write it"
• "the song's theme as well as" → "the song's theme, as well as"
• Wikilink as music videos
• "in February 2017 via CMT" → "in February 2017, via CMT,"
• "the same day as Andress' debut album." → "the same day as Lady Like."

Background and release

• Merge with the below section, retitling to Background and composition
• "She returned to" → "Andress returned to"
• "Kara DioGuardi who was" → "Kara DioGuardi, who was"
• Move the release info to the reception section, which I will instruct more further on
• "in May 2020 announcing that the song will" → "in May 2020, announcing that the song would"
• Mention what nation the country radio stations are in
• "as the next single" → "as a new single"
• Mention when the deluxe was released

Composition and lyrics

• Make this the second para of the above section
• "and produced it with" → "and handled the production with"
• "It discusses a" → "The song discusses a"
• "elaborating that "most songs" → "elaborating: "Most songs" since this is a full sentence
• "never an in-between"." → "never an in-between."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
• "romanticized movies" and that" → "romanticized movies" and"
• CMT should not be italicised
• "piano-driven exposé"." → "piano-driven expose"."
• "the lyric "You" → "the line "You"

Reception

• Retitle to Release and reception, with the release info making up the first para
• "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
• "Caramanica and deemed it" → "Caramanica deemed it"
• "of the track and that it" → "of the track and it"
• "ABC News Radio called it" → "The staff of ABC News Radio called the song"
• "for Sounds Like Nashville deemed" → "for Sounds Like Nashville, deemed"
• "at number 49 and at number 54" → "at numbers 49 and 54"

Promotion

• Wikilink music video
• "February 22, 2017 via CMT." → "February 22, 2017, via CMT."
• "on March 27, 2020 coinciding" → "on March 27, 2020, coinciding"
• The location is only sourced as a house, not a mansion
• CMT should not be italicised
• "and that she wished she would have" → "wishing in retrospect she would have"
• "and was hoping that" → "and was hoping"
• Shouldn't the performances be identified as in February and May 2020, respectively?
• Wikilink Country Radio Seminar per MOS:LINK2SECT

Track listing

• Shouldn't this section be added to source the separate lengths?
  • I added it because the reimagined version also has a different length. However, the 2020 version of the song wasn't released as a separate single for digital download so I instead mentioned it in the background and composition section. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

Personnel

• Good

Release history

• Label → Label(s)

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 28.6%!!!
• Cite Spotify as publisher instead on ref 5
• Cite ABC News Radio as publisher instead on ref 15
• WP:OVERLINK of YouTube on ref 22 and add Y108 in the publisher parameter, piping to WDSY-FM

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this should be relatively easy since it's a short review! --K. Peake 08:53, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
  • @Kyle Peake: thanks again for reviewing! I addressed everything and left some comments. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

• Sebbirrrr Nice response, though her full name still needs to be used under producers per Template:Infobox song; this is not a track listing and any articles still using surnames only either do it because that's how it's credited or they're outdated. --K. Peake 07:43, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake: Got it! Added her full name now. Let me know if there's something else I need to add. Sebbirrrr (talk) 12:05, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

• Sebbirrrr Great; all that you need to do now is change debut album to Lady Like in the second para and add a comma after February 22, 2017, in the music video section. --K. Peake 12:27, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake: Done! Sebbirrrr (talk) 12:37, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, congrats on getting this done in just one day! --K. Peake 13:46, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:03, 30 August 2022 (UTC)

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• ... that Ingrid Andress said that she wished she included a parrot which startled her in the music video for her single "The Stranger"? Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20201124182645/http://www.cmt.com/news/1819526/ingrid-andress-the-stranger-video/
  • Reviewed: N/A
  • Comment: 3rd DYK nomination

Improved to Good Article status by Sebbirrrr (talk). Self-nominated at 20:11, 3 August 2022 (UTC).

• Article is good; promoted to GA status yesterday. Copyvio score good. The hook is sourced. I don't think it's very interesting but that's subjective so I won't fail based on that alone. QPQ not needed —VersaceSpace 🌃 13:48, 4 August 2022 (UTC)