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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 02:58, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay. Let's start the review, shall we?

Lead
  • "It was released on February 23, 1999 under Dr. Dre's Aftermath Entertainment, and Web Records." The comma is unnecessary.
  • "Recorded in Ferndale, Michigan following Eminem's discovery by Dr. Dre and Jimmy Iovine" Discovery isn't the right word. Recruitment is better in this context.
Background
  • No issues.
Recording
  • No issues.
Lyrics
  • No issues.
Production
  • No issues.
Commercial response
  • Why is "platinum" capitalized in mid-sentence? It is a generic term.
Critical reception
  • The A.V. Club is a publication, and thus should be italicized.
  • Wikilink Spin.
Aftermath
  • No issues.
Lawsuits
  • No issues.

That's all. On hold until the issues are resolved. —DAP388 (talk) 19:05, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks a bunch for the review! :) Basilisk4u (talk) 20:45, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. That's a pass. :) —DAP388 (talk) 01:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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