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Reviewer: Raymie (talk · contribs) 04:42, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

This article is nearly there, but it could use a bit of work in the lead section and in avoiding long direct quotes.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    I wonder if the lead is a little long, particularly the second paragraph.
  • The lead reflects the body of the article which is huge. So I think the lead is justified and I have written several articles with big leads. Perhaps, I should break the second paragraph into two, what's say?Krish | Talk To Me 14:38, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
    There are some long quotes where paraphrasing might prove useful, such as in the "Development" subsection and to a lesser extent in "Themes and analysis". I really want to see trimming down of the direct quotes in "Development" especially. Have you considered using quote boxes for important quotes?
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  3. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
    Most contributions have been by the nominator and as part of a GOCE copy edit.
  4. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Appropriate captions in use. The only non-free image is the movie poster, which has an FUR.
  5. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Giving this 7 days to look at trimming down the lead and eliminating lengthy quotes in the aforementioned sections.

Pinging nominator Krish!. Raymie (t • c) 05:06, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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