Talk:The Sims: Livin' Large/GA1

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Nominator: Vrxces (talk · contribs) 07:36, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: LEvalyn (talk · contribs) 08:48, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will take on this review! I typically prefer to make copyedits myself and only place comments here when I have questions, though of course as always you should feel free to change or discuss any edits you happen to disagree with. Looking forward to it! ~ L 🌸 (talk) 08:48, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

"Development and release" is missing the actual original release -- it just explains the subsequent Mac port. I'd also suggest starting a new paragraph (i.e., inserting a paragraph break) for the release information. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 09:05, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I made a few very minor copy edits, but the prose looks great. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 09:05, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It might be worth noting that this expansion was the very first introduction of sex to the Sims. More information here. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 09:05, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Both images have thorough and compelling non-free-use rationales. In particular I agree that the gameplay screenshot is encyclopedically very important: the whole expansion is about cosmetics and game objects, so it's valuable to have some kind of illustration of that. ~ L 🌸 (talk) 09:09, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]