Talk:The Series Finale/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "Wanda Maximoff's chaos magic".
- Add a serial comma after "re-assembled" (American English).
- Also remove the comma after "Maximoff's magic".
- "survived development of the episode" – reword
- Add hyphens between "fine tune" and "self acceptance".
- "before beung changed" – typo
- "labelling" → "labeling" (American English)
- "eratic-looking" – typo
- Add a comma after "In some instances".
- "this episodes" – typo
- "given freedom" → "given the freedom"
- WP:RECEPTION: More reviews, less quotes.
- "CHris Gridley" – typo
- Be consistent with The Art of VFX and Art of VFX.
- Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Did you mean to pass this one yet? No one has addressed the issues you brought up. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 01:42, 15 September 2021 (UTC)- Please ignore that last comment. I don't know where my brain is at. I thought these comments were new for the 14th, not from the 11th, and Adamstom.97 addressed your comments. Apologies and thanks for reviewing all the WandaVision nominations! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 02:49, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
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