Talk:The Santaroga Barrier

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"their dinner conversations knowledgeably reference"

knowledgeably referencing is clumsy English and at any rate not how one would commonly describe brilliant dinner chat. How about: over dinner, they cogently discuss the theories... or (avoiding another unusual adverb): their dinner conversations revolve around cogent discussion of... 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:FC0C:4A6D:BB93:2F6F (talk) 19:57, 15 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Location clarification

Frank Herbert lived in Santa Rosa CA when he wrote and published Dune, specifically on Slater Street, Santa Rosa. The title is an obvious play on words of the town name, and is listed in the book as being 12 miles south of Cloverdale which is a real town in CA. I'm surprised none of this is in the main article.