Talk:The Riddler's Revenge/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:49, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Many other of these articles have the name of the ride in italics, why does this start differently?
"located at... located in" is repetitive.
Link "inversions" the first time round in the lead.
"approximately 3 minutes." -> three.
"eleventh roller coaster[1] on April 4, 1998,[2]" for the sake of better looking prose, put ref [1] after the 1998,
"which opened exactly one year prior.[9] The opening of " repetitive.
"on the 3 minute" three-minute.
Put page numbers in the PDF refs, along with format=pdf.

I'll put it on-hold for a week or so while these minor issues are addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:26, 28 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done Themeparkgc Talk 04:13, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Should the title of the article therefore be The Riddler's Revenge not just Riddler's Revenge as you currently have it? The Rambling Man (talk) 08:03, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Yes. I just tried to move it myself but there is a redirect in the way. As you are an administrator, would you mind moving it? Otherwise I'll just tag it with {{db-move}}. Themeparkgc Talk 08:43, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I've done that move, I'll take one final look at the article shortly. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:58, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]