Talk:The Return of Harmony

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Date	Process	Result
July 2, 2012	Peer review	Reviewed
October 25, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

Current status: Good article

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GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 05:33, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Um... ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bruce Campbell (talk • contribs)

Doing. TBr and ley 01:41, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Image doesn't pass WP:NFCC, as it doesn't help reader understand topic itself. Expand rationale or remove please.

Actually the file page for the image offers a rationale; "To illustrate a poignant scene in the episode (infobox). The episode focuses on the six main ponies attempts to locate the Elements of Harmony and eradicate Discord. The screenshot not only illustrates the main characters, it also illustrates what the Elements of Harmony are and how they work. In addition, the art style of the episode was praised by one reviewer and this screenshot, of the climax of the episode, helps illustrate the animation style." If this isn't still appropriate I'll just remove it, not a big deal either way. Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:24, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Where are the production codes or running time referenced?
household rating should be Nielsen household rating, which should be linked

Done. Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:24, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Direct quotes, as seen in plot, need to be referenced

Changed all instances of direct quotes to just general prose. Bruce Campbell (talk) 00:55, 24 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Link The Hub in first mention, per WP:UNDERLINK
"Executive Producer" and "Consulting Producer" shouldn't be in capitals, per MOS:CAPS
"The episodes were the final episodes" to "The episodes were the final to"
"%" should be "percent"
"Many reviews and articles" should be "Many critics", cause they said so
Don't "shout" in reference titles
Ref. 5 is missing accessdate
Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

All simple enough changes; done. Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:24, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I see some issues at the article's peer review page, they weren't addressed, but now do need to be, please fix them

Indeed; some very helpful comments, and I believe I have applied them where necessary (some were already done). Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:24, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

TBr and ley 17:01, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think I hit all your points, and if not instruct me further. Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:24, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks fine now. Passing. TBr and ley 22:40, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Plot: Part one and Plot: Part two are not "too long or excessively detailed"

The sections "Plot: Part one" and "Plot: Part two" have recently been tagged with

"This article's plot summary may be too long or excessively detailed. Please help improve it by removing unnecessary details and making it more concise."

I'd like to cast a vote for the position

"The sections 'Plot: Part one' and 'Plot: Part two' are not actually "too long or excessively detailed", and nothing currently needs to be done to improve them."

- 189.122.52.73 (talk) 07:14, 6 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Well, they have to be shortened under 400 words per MOS:TV#Plot section.