Talk:The Power of Good-Bye/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:51, 25 December 2016 (UTC)

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• and was additionally produced by Madonna → state "the singer" here for alternation
• the album on September 22, 1998. "The Power of Good-Bye" was additionally released as a double A-Side single → the album on September 22, 1998, being additionally distributed as a double A-side single
• the song talks about how → state "the track" here for alternation
• consisting in shuffle beats → consisting of shuffle beats
• vocals and comparing to → vocals and comparing them to
• Release year for "Frozen" in brackets
• top-ten → top 10
• and United Kingdom → "the" before UK
• top-twenty → top 20
• seventh highest → seventh-highest
• award shows and TV appearances → award shows and made various appearances on television.

Infobox

• Alternative text for the cover
• "Little Star" (UK) → write "UK" out

Background and release

• title role on the film adaptation → title role in the film adaptation
• of the musical Evita → no "the"
• songs from the latter → state "tracks" here for alternation
• In the meantime Madonna had written → comma after "meantime"
• expedition in Barneys he met → comma before "he met"
• Madonna. Nowels commended the singer → Madonna, particularly commending the singer
• songwriting skills and was later invited → songwriting skills, being later invited
• as the album's third single around the world → as the album's third single worldwide
• chosen to be release → chosen to be released
• the song was released as the album's third single on September 22, 1998 → alternate here with "was distributed" and "as the record's third release"
• September 22, 1998, as a two-track single → no comma here
• several experimental remixes of the song → alternate here with "the track"

Recording and composition

• worked with Orbit only → worked solely with Orbit
• According to Orbit, "Most of the tracks → According to him, "Most of the tracks
• uncomfortable with Madonna around the studio → state "the singer" here for alternation
• However his disorganised nature → comma after "However" + disorganized
• fired, when he reached → remove comma
• four chord arpeggio → four-chord arpeggio
• this is characteristic of the songs → this is characteristic for the song
• Orbit explained: "There's something → Orbit explained, "There's something
• Buddhist philosophy as well as practising → comma before "as well" + practicizing
• He also described the song as → state "the track" here for alternation
• were about Madonna's former husband → state "the singer's" here for alternation

Critical reception

• Allmusic → AllMusic
• praised the inclusion of the song → state "the track" here for alternation
• writing that the song was "[s]tructured → state "it" here for alternation

Chart performance

• on the issue of October 17, 1998 → on the issue for the week ending October 17, 1998
• top-forty → top 40
• top-thirty → top 30
• top-twenty → top 20
• Unlink AllMusic here
• what kept the song from making the top-ten was because → what kept the single from making the top 10 was that
• 10 weeks → ten weeks
• together debuted → remove "together" as it's already clear
• in the country → "the" to "that"
• The single CD version → remove "single"
• The song went further in countries like Austria, Finland, Germany, Italy, Netherlands, Scotland, Spain and Switzerland, where it reached the top-ten. → In countries like..., it reached the top ten.
• Release year in brackets for "Believe"
• It attained gold certifications from → It further attained Gold certifications in
• reach number one,[41] meanwhile in Australia the song → reach number one, while in Australia the song meanwhile
• Release year for "Love Don't Live Here Anymore" in brackets
• top-twenty → top 20

Music video

• Unlink "music video" here as it's a common term
• the music video storyline → the visual's storyline
• Together they concocted → comma before "they"
• and make it perfect → removed as it's unencyclopedic
• British film, Welcome to Sarajevo → no comma here
• Calling him "The sexiest → Calling him "the sexiest"
• Madonna then goes walking by the sea → alternate with "The singer" here
• Throughout the video, there are the scenes → Remove "the"
• said that Madonna looked "startlingly → "the singer" for alternation here
• found the story line → found the plot

Live performances

• children of Opus 118, from The Harlem School of the Arts → no comma
• Madonna performed an off-key version → state "the singer" here
• On November 23, 1998, Madonna appeared → alternate with "she" here

Track listings and formats

• flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

• flawless ;)

Charts

• flawless ;)

Certifications

• flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 32.9% is ok ;)

Images and others

• Images and audio sample perfectly illustrate the article
• Sample seems stable ;)

Links

• No problem here!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
• No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

•  On hold for 7 days! Good job done with this! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:18, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
  • @Cartoon network freak: all good to go! —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 10:19, 29 December 2016 (UTC)
    • Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

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