Talk:The Perfect World Foundation

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I have taken the liberty of revising the English in the interests of readability for those on this side of the North Sea. The intention was to retain the meaning but in some cases the meaning was unclear, you might have to correct my interpretation but it does indicate that there was a lackof clarity on that point.

It would be useful to address the following:

Where is it incorporated? What is its legal status? Is it a non-profit?
Is the name of the award: The Perfect World Award or The Perfect World Foundation Award but for this year for Conservationist of the Year? OR the Conservationist of the Year Award awarded annually by the TPWF? OR the Fragile Rhino Award or is the Fragile Rhino the name of the sculpture that comes with the Award itself? Now, I think I worked it out 99% but the press out there certainly haven't, they are very confused.
Was the award called the Conservationist of the Year award in 2014, 15 and 16, or only thereafter?
Three citations needed.
No reason is given for Attenborough's award other than the generic intents of TPWF implied.
No reason is given for Sylvia Earle's ward either, marine conservation is an assumption only.
Could we enlarge on what each award was given for, otherwise their actual work is lost. I only found one in the press, that was for Great Thunberg.
Some images would be useful, there is a Logo? espcially the Fragile Rhino, which was an Aaagh! moment when I saw it following up a citation.
If you generally call yourself "Perfect World" rather than "The Perfect World...." would it be better to move the page to Perfect World Foundation? See Wikipedia:Article titles E x nihil ^(talk) : Ex nihil (talk) 13:41, 17 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]