Talk:The Pandorica Opens/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:03, 16 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 05:03, 16 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments

Images, external links, and references look good
"The weather conditions were very cold with wind a rain which caused difficulties..." Missing word here I think
"Gillan was stated she "really wanted" to work with the iconic monster". "Was stated" doesn't quite work here
The A.V. Club is italicized
Is the wikiquote link accurate?
Should add something about the ratings to the lead (look for other possible items that could be added to lead, if any)

Pretty minor comments, but I'll place the review on hold for seven days anyways. Well done article as always, Ruby 2010/2013 05:31, 18 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Knew I was missing something in the lead! The Wikiquote page includes all the episodes with the Eleventh Doctor, not just lines spoken by the character (Doctor Who episodes are understandably broken up by Doctor era as there are so many). Would you like me to get it to point to the section for this episode (if possible)? Glimmer721 ^talk 21:28, 18 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you want, but after hearing about how wikiquotes are structured for Doctor Who, it's not way necessary you change it. Anyways, passing the article for GA. Nice work! Ruby 2010/2013 18:38, 19 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]