Talk:The New Cup/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:56, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

Not sure if United States needs to be linked; seems overly general, but if you want to keep it I'm not against it.
The redlink in the infobox isn't necessarily and can be removed.
Add the overall episode number to the lead.
Bobin and Sarkies don't have to be linked in the production section, since they are in the lead and infobox.
"In the scene when Jemaine and then Bret ask" rm then; interrupts sentence flow
"Jemaine wears a leather cowboy waistcoat and cowboy shoes. Finally during the credits, he wears a cowboy hat." reword to combine into one sentence. Maybe something like "a leather cowboy waistcoat and cowboy shows, and wears a cowboy hat during the credits."

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:10, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wizardman, I have found another issue:

I believe I have addressed all the concerns raised. Thank you for the review!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:11, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, article now passes as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:53, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]