Talk:The Milt Grant Show

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Date	Process	Result
August 1, 2023	Good article nominee	Listed
January 15, 2024	Good topic candidate	Not promoted

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 18, 2023.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that teenagers picketed The Washington Post to protest the sudden cancellation of The Milt Grant Show, a teen dance TV show in Washington, D.C.?

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GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:39, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Oo change of pace! I'll review this tomorrow (2 August UTC). ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:39, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

Earwig gives me no concerns.

Prose

How about instead of "and aired on" you make it "that aired on" (without a comma) to improve the flow of the sentence?
- Good call.
"WFIL-TV/Philadelphia's" – why a slash?
- Definitely more of my helper on this one, User:Nathan Obral. Not quite right stylistically here.
§ Synopsis should really be entitled § Background.
- Done
I am a bit confused on Milt Grant's Record Hop (vs The Milt Grant Show).
- The name changed by April 1957 and not earlier than the end of January. Added a ref to its first
Wikilink ABC.
- Done
Wikilink UHF.
- Done
"Grant went on to a career in independent station management" – I would wikilink independent station here as it is wikilinked in the lead.
- Done
"Washington in 1966 and" – comma before and IMO since the sentence is long.
- Reworded a bit
"his 2007 death" – recommend "death in 2007" for formality.
- Done
Do we have an article on which National Archives it was screening it?
- Yeah, good catch.
I would honestly summarise the Grant National Archives quotation a bit.
- Done

Refs

Passes spotcheck on refs 2, 8, 13 and 22. Nice work!

Others

Reccomend template:use X English (optional)
Short description goes at the very top.
- Fixed

@LunaEatsTuna: First group of fixes. Awaiting ref checks. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:42, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Perfect! Happy to pass. Congrats! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 23:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 18:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that teenagers picketed The Washington Post to protest the sudden cancellation of The Milt Grant Show, a teen dance TV show in Washington, D.C.? Source: https://search.proquest.com/docview/141547941
- ALT1: ... that before he was an investigative reporter, Carl Bernstein was a semi-regular dancer on The Milt Grant Show? Source: McNichol, Tom (August 1988). "Great Balls of Fire". Regardie's. pp. 151+. (Available on request)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Antimonumento +72

Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Self-nominated at 01:04, 2 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/The Milt Grant Show; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

First hook verified; AGF on second offline source. Prefer first hook as it puts more emphasis on the show itself (is in Washington, D.C. really necessary though?), but both are fine. Article was promoted to GA within 7 days. No NPOV, no copyvio, hook cited inline, quotes cited inline and verified. @Sammi Brie: Nice job! :3 F4U (they /it) 14:49, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]