Talk:The Lost Caverns of Tsojcanth/GA1
GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Comments
[edit]- The image File:S4 Lost Caverns of Tsojcanth.jpg should be reduced in size. It is Fair Use and only used in this article which forces it smaller.
- A caption of the image, similar to that seen at Dwellers of the Forbidden City would be a useful addition.
- Two sentences are a little bothersome:
- After traversing a wilderness and two levels of dungeons, they must defeat Drelzna, the vampiric daughter of long deceased archmage Iggwilv. - "must defeat"? you cannot fail? How about "...of dungeons, the player faces Drelzna, the vampiric daughter..."
- Monsters appearing in the published version included the demon princes Baphomet, Fraz-Urb'luu, Graz'zt, and Kostchtchie who later appeared in the original Monster Manual II. - please clarify, is it just Kostchtchie who later appeared? or all of them? If all of them please write "...who all later appeared...", if just Kostchtchie separating the clause with a comma may make it more clear.
- This is a great article on the subject. I compared it with other similar [:Category:GA-Class Dungeons & Dragons articles|D&D GA class]] articles when reviewing. --maclean 07:12, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 06:58, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'll address those issues tomorrow. Thanks again. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 08:19, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for the reivew! :) BOZ (talk) 16:16, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
- I fixed the above issues. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 19:13, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for the reivew! :) BOZ (talk) 16:16, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'll address those issues tomorrow. Thanks again. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 08:19, 25 February 2009 (UTC)