Talk:The List (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review

I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.

As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.

Lead

Good

Plot

Good

Reception

Good

References

Good

Verdict

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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—Hahc 21 04:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]