Talk:The Lightning Thief/GA2
GA Review
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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS): 
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
In depth review
[edit]When an item has been adressed, I will check mark the item.
- I added {{fixed}} as it will make it easier for me to fix them. You can possibly add {{done}}. ;) Pmlineditor Talk 08:58, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
- Talk about the next book in the article.
Prose
[edit]- It is the first book in the Percy Jackson & The Olympians series, and chronicles the adventures of twelve year old Percy Jackson, who discovers he is a demigod, the son of a mortal woman and the Greek god Poseidon.
- Wouldn't it better to say : It is the first book in the Percy Jackson & The Olympians series, which are chronicles of the adventures of twelve year old Percy Jackson, who discovers he is a demigod, the son of a mortal woman and the Greek god Poseidon.
Fixed
- Wouldn't it better to say : It is the first book in the Percy Jackson & The Olympians series, which are chronicles of the adventures of twelve year old Percy Jackson, who discovers he is a demigod, the son of a mortal woman and the Greek god Poseidon.
- The book is commonly classified as young-adult fiction,
- By whom?
- Fixed
- By whom?
- The book is often praised for its feel of realism and for how believable each character is.
- By whom?
- Fixed
- By whom?
- However, at the end of the book, he betrays Percy and leaves him half dead; revealing that he works for the Titan Kronos.
- Rather than giving the position of the book away, why not say :However, he later betrays Percy [...] for the Titan Kronos.
- Fixed
- Rather than giving the position of the book away, why not say :However, he later betrays Percy [...] for the Titan Kronos.
- The article needs more Wikilinks (such as realism, poseidon)
- New information that is presented in infobox or lead must be sourced.
- Fixed
- Avoid weasel words
- Fixed (the sentence about the audiobook you mentioned in IRC) Pmlineditor Talk 07:49, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
- There is a section with only three sentences.
Doing... Expanded a bit. Pmlineditor Talk 10:21, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed Expanded to double the size. Really, not much info about it. Pmlineditor Talk 11:45, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
Images
[edit]- Add movie logo image
- Perhaps change the caption for the image of author to something other than quote?
Links
[edit]- These articles are disambiguation pages:
- Artemis Fowl
- Fixed
- Empire State
- Fixed
- Kronos
- Fixed
- Percy Jackson
- Fixed
- Realism
- Fixed
- Artemis Fowl
- Reference 19 is dead.
- Fixed Used cached version from Google. Pmlineditor Talk 08:15, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
The article has a few problems. I am keeping it on hold for seven days, so that the problems can be fixed. Warrior4321 19:13, 31 August 2009 (UTC)
After all the fixes completed here, and fixes which were asked on IRC, this article is ready for promotion! 
Warrior4321 16:46, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks to you and Shimgray for the reviews and the help.
Pmlineditor Talk 17:41, 1 September 2009 (UTC)