Talk:The Leader (web series)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The infobox itself, on the other hand, appears to be missing several parameters, such as "language" and "voices".
- Added "language" (although I didn't do it before since its quite redundant); and I don't have the information on the voice actors to include it (no sources provide as far as I can tell). Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The word "intellectual" doesn't seem neutral. Try describing who Karl Marx was instead.
- Changed for "philosopher". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "propagandism".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Again, change "intellectual" per WP:NPOV.
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The phrase "and leaving of" sounds off as it splits the sentence. Try rewording.
- Paraphrased. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Remove the comma after "with his death".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"merchandisesuch" → "merchandise such"
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "stage plays".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think "sinonizated" is an actual word.
- True. Reworded as "went through a sinicization". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"social-media" → "social media"
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"more-serious" → "more serious"
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Is there a word missing between "about political economy"?
- No. Is it sounding strange to you? The article by Engels that Marx reads is about political economy. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A little bit, yes, but no worries as it's still readable. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"surplus value" → "surplus-value"
- Not usually hyphenated. The article surplus value writes it this way. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "boils".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Add a serial comma after "Austrian, Prussian".
- Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
All summaries are under 200 words, so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.

In the text and in the reference by her, change "Millingan" to "Milligan".
- Wow, nice catch. Thanks. Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Similar issue, but change "Fanzoni" to "Fantoni"
- Thanks again. Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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