Talk:The Latchkey/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:07, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I should complete this by the day's end JAGUAR 16:07, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"The premise of the plot focuses on two businessmen who are friends Will (or Bill in some publications) and John" - this sentence is a run-on
"The landlady of the house leases the apartment to two ladies" - who are the two ladies? Do they have names or are important to the plot?
Nothing on production in the lead
"A surviving film still leaves open the possibility of identifying three actors" - 'still' as in a screenshot or 'still' as in it could still leave open a possibility?
Some of the quotes in the reception section are too long and would be better of being paraphrased

References

No dead links
Ref 2 is missing an access date

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Another well researched 1910 film, I cannot find anything major enough that would make this be put on hold. It is well researched, well written and all of the references are in check. Well done JAGUAR 14:48, 5 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]