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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Reviewer: Sebbirrrr (talk · contribs) 21:16, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Picking this up for a review!

Infobox and lead

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  • Remove the short description, start date and duration templates as they're all redundant
  • "taken from Swift's" → "taken from the former's" to avoid repetition as the next sentence begins with Swift
  •  Done
  • "lattermost" → "latter"
  • "Aiming to experiment with..." → this sentence is quite long, maybe try to split it?
  •  Done
  • For consistency, you should either have Nashville or Nashville, Tennessee here and in the body
  • "the refrain" → "the chorus"
  • "In the lyrics" → "Lyrically"
  •  Done

Background and release

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  • See above for Nashville
  •  Done
  • ""The Last Time" is track number 10..." → not sure if this is necessary as it seems quite irrelevant
  •  Done
  • Isn't November 11 the release date? Ref 10 just lists several singles while ref 11 gives an exact date
  • If it was released on the 11th then it wouldn't make much sense that the single charted on the UK chart dated the 10th... either way, I reworded it a bit.
 Done Ippantekina (talk) 02:14, 21 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Neither source states that Big Machine released it as a single
  •  Done
  • The ref doesn't state that they performed the song on The X-Factor
  •  Done
  • Are there more live performances of the song?

Composition and lyrics

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  •  Done

Critical reception

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  • Rename it to "Critical reception and commercial performance" and insert the commercial performance paragraph as it's quite short
  • There's a lot of repetition of "[reviewer] of [publication]" and "[reviewer] from [publication]" please fix it
 Done Ippantekina (talk) 02:15, 21 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and vocals:" → "and vocals, stating:"
  •  Done
  • For Clayton-Lea's review, I think you should specify that both this song and "Everything Has Changed" were deemed "desperate attempts"
  •  Done

Commercial performance

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  • See above
  • "After Red was released" → "Upon Red's release"
  •  Done
  • "After its UK single release" → WP:OR as it's not explicitly given by the source
  •  Done
  • "for the week of November 10–16, 2013." → "for the week of November 10, 2013."
  •  Done
  • No need to mention the peak positions in Ireland and Scotland, saying they charted in the top 20 is good enough
 Done now, Ippantekina (talk) 02:16, 21 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Personnel

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  • Tidal ref is dead, can it be replaced with the album's liner notes?
  •  Done

 Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

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  •  Done

 Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"The Last Time (Taylor's Version)"

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  • Remove duration and start date templates
  • "under Republic Records imprint" → don't think "imprint" is necessary
  •  Done
  • "on November 11, 2012" → "on November 11, 2021"
  •  Done
  • Move the refs for the peak positions at the end of the sentence
  •  Done

 Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Personnel

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  • The div col templates aren't needed as less than 20 people contributed to the song
  •  Done

 Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

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 Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Copyvio at 27%, looks fine
  • Source check: 8, 9, 10, 11, 13, 14, 15, 23, 28, 32
  • AllMusic should be tagged as the publisher for ref 4
  • Ref 7 is missing access-date
  • Ref 9 is dead
  • Why are refs 14 and 15 tagged with url-access=limited?
  • Tag ref 23 with via=Newspapers.com
  • Ref 26 is missing the date
  • Link Billboard for ref 31
  • Link Alexis Petridis for ref 32
  • I'll AGF for the Perone source
  • The ProQuest sources look kind of awkward with the id and via parameters, maybe keep one and remove the other?
  •  Done

 Done Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Outcome

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 On hold for seven days until all issues are fixed! Sebbirrrr (talk) 22:20, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I have responded to your comments above :) Ippantekina (talk) 03:18, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Ippantekina: Good job! I've left more comments to some of your replies. Sebbirrrr (talk) 10:01, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your patience. I believe all are addressed now, Ippantekina (talk) 02:17, 21 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Ippantekina:  Passing Everything has been addressed! If you have the time, I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at any of my current GANs. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:52, 21 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.