Talk:The King of Fighters '96/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 23:46, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 21:44, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"The game made a few changes to gameplay, such as the introduction of new techniques, and made various changes to the composition of some teams, with a few of them introducing new characters". Isn't too vague, with all these various, some etc?
- Revised.
"and with which Iori is connected by sharing a similar fighting style due to his predecessor's curse". Can you explain it better?
- Expanded
"Many people attended the word-of-mouth tests". Ditto.
- Expanded
Too many "was", "were", et simila in Release and Related media. Try to rewrite all of them.
"only in Japan,." There's a superfluous comma.
- Done.

@Tintor2: Nothing to say about Reception.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 21:23, 11 December 2024 (UTC) @TeenAngels1234: Tried revising everything. Thanks for the feedback.Tintor2 (talk) 21:40, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]