Talk:The Image of You/GA1

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

So we meet again, will do this today. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Target CD to Compact disc in the infobox
Add single chronology there for the artist
"is a song performed by Albanian" → "is a song by Albanian"
Mention the digital download release too
Remove wikilink to Emotion, as that is an obvious term
"The song represented Albania in" → ""The Image of You" represented Albania for"
"the pre-selection competition Festivali i Këngës with" → "the pre-selection competition, Festivali i Këngës, with" for target to the correct festival
"twenty four scoring a total of one hundred and six points" → "24, scoring a total of 106 points" per MOS:NUMBERS
Mention the performance of the song in the lead

Done

I want to keep this as in other articles--Lorik17 (talk) 22:07, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"In 2003, Anjeza Shahini was" → "In 2003, Shahini was"
"As part from the competition's rules" → "For following the competition's rules"
"The singer took part" → "Shahini took part"
"song "Dua të jem imazhi yt" composed by Edmond Zhulali and written by Agim Doçi" → "song "Dua të jem imazhi yt", composed by Zhulali and written by Doçi"
Give mention of the CD and 2018 releases in the background para too, since they don't belong in the comp one and mention the labels also
"Musically, the song is" → "Musically, the latter is"
Target rhythmic to Rhythm
Remove wikilink to Emotion
"in what appears to be a whirlwind" → "in what seems to be a whirlwind" or something similar so the lead and this aren't 100% identical
Last sentence should have a ref invoked at the end of it

Done

Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës as you have done that earlier in the body
"to determine country's participant" → "to determine the country's participant"
Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2004
"It consisted of two semi-finals" → "The former consisted of two semi-finals"
"on 18 and 19 December, and the grand final on 20 December 2003" → "on 18 and 19 December 2003, and the grand final on 20 December of that year"
"in which, Anjeza Shahini was chosen" → "which included Shahini being chosen"
"represent the country" → "represent Albania"
Img needs alt text and only to mention the surname Shahini with no wikilink

Remove the target on 49th edition as that's already been wikilinked to
Remove wikilink on Istanbul per above
"on 12 May and the grand final on 15 May 2004" → "on 12 May 2004 and the grand final three days later"
"to the then-Eurovision rules" → "to the Eurovision rules at the time"
"except the host country" → "apart from the host country"
"Spain and the United Kingdom" → "Spain, and the United Kingdom"
"*"final, although, the top ten" → "final. However, the top ten"
"performed thirteenth in the semi-final" → "performed 13th in the semi-final"
"and qualified for the" → "while the country qualified for the"
"In the grand final, the country" → "In the grand final, Albania"
"in a field of twenty four with" → "in a field of 24, with"
Mention the performance was of the song and shouldn't this be mentioned before the 2012 ranking? If keeping it after, add a mention that it was the 2004 performance though. Also, a ref should be cited at the end of the performance's sentence.

Done

Retitle to Track listings
You should only use the compilation CD ref for the CD track listing; the other is redundant

Done

Once again, only the refs should be centred; see my fix on "Hear My Plea" to understand how to do this
Cite the compilation CD source for the first release

Done

Run the tool to make sure that all of these are archived
Copyvio score seems very safe
Ref 2 should cite European Broadcasting Union as the sole publisher
Target Laut to laut.de on ref 4
Ref 12 is essentially useless since Hitparade should not be used for the release sourcing that ref 13 verifies; delete the former
Ref 14 should have "on Apple Music..." removed from the two titles; instead cite the respective publishers as Apple Music (AU) and Apple Music (US)

Done

On hold, nice work and I did notice similarities to "Hear My Plea", take on my tips when writing your articles in the future. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:39, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's good, made a few minor edits myself but now it's ✓ Pass time! --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:13, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]