Talk:The Harbingers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

I'm concerned about the heavy referencing in the lead. As the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, references should be minimal, as they would be discussed further and ref'd later. I took one out that wasn't needed, and I'm sure more can be cut.
"Players must collect the six Keystones of different colour to win" colours.
"Hellin is evil infant trouble-maker" is an evil infant
Capitalization varies between Numb skull and Numb Skull. Make it consistent.
"Chantraine. and a Numb skull" comma
"The Harbingers became one of the top ten best selling games in America and UK, within months of its release." does this mean both Americas or just North?
"two booster tapes was released." were

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:25, 3 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Done, thanks for the review. -- d'oh! _[talk] 23:56, 3 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. One thing I would add, if you can find it, if if there's any release information in Australia, since that's where the game originated. Anyway, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:40, 4 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]