Talk:The Grand Babylon Hotel

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Serious grammatical problems

The narrative in this article switches randomly between past and present. Needs fixing. 212.159.59.5 (talk) 19:11, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It is also overly detailed and cuts off suddenly.Saxophobia (talk) 15:59, 3 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]