Talk:The Good Dinosaur/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:20, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:20, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, Chompy Ace (which always accompanies your GA reviews) has fixed some issues. Can you re-revise them and strike the resolved issues? Meanwhile, I'll resolve issues I can see distinctly. GeraldWL 16:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]Non-free use rationale for the poster is in good condition.Do Denise Ream and Mychael Danna need references?- Removed
- Cinematographers, however, do need sources.
- Does credits count as reliable?
The current reference being used says the runtime is 97 minutes; other sources disagree.- Changed
#Box_office mentions a source putting the budget at $200 million, so change $175 million to "$175–200 million" and add said source.Add commas after Frances McDormand and "November 10, 2015".The phrase "various American nature" sounds weird. Try rewording.- Redone.
"to the film" → "into the film"
Plot and voice cast
[edit]- Plot is under 700 words.
Velociraptor → Velociraptors (plural)- Done.
- Cast section looks good.
Production
[edit]Development
[edit]Remove the comma after "film in 2009".- Add commas after "producer" and "November 27, 2013".
- Done the former. The latter would make it grammatically incorrect.
- The reference after "June 2011" is reciting this article, so I would cite that instead even though it's shorter.
- Done! Talk about a subtle discovery.
How do we know details were shared on August 20, 2011, when the article is from August 21?- No mention of "the 1964 New York World's Fair" or "Audio-Animatronics" in this reference.
- Seems done.
Revisions
[edit]- Remove the comma after "next month".
- Done.
- The first reference in this section doesn't mention Walker leaving due to "story problems".
Here, and in other sections, change "..." to "[...]" (more visually pleasing).- The sentence starting with "Peterson moved on" should be fully in past tense.
- Is it good now?
- A reference is needed for the sentence starting with "In September 2013".
- Seemingly done.
- was "the → was because "the
- Can't see that word.
That second paragraph is a big, partly unnecessary quote block, so try trimming it down a bit.The phrase "Arlo was a huge dinosaur" needs to be reworded.dismantled → "dismantled"The third paragraph contains another unnecessary quote block. Trim it.The last part of the sentence starting with "Arlo's three siblings" needs a source.What's up with these various quote blocks?! Trim the one in the final paragraph as well.
Design and setting
[edit]In the caption, replace "stunning" since it's not neutral.Main issue here is the appearance of more quote blocks.
Music
[edit]- This section looks good.
Video games
[edit]- Can this become a subsection at the end of #Release?
- Also, can this be turned into prose instead of a list?
- Done all.
Release
[edit]- Remove the comma after "accompany the film".
- A reference is needed for Party Central being shown with Muppets Most Wanted.
- Seems resolved all. GeraldWL 12:20, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]Box office
[edit]- Add commas after "November 25, 2015" and the second use of Argentina.
- Done.
- The reference after "opening weekend" is missing an author.
- done.
- The second-to-last sentence in the second paragraph needs a source.
- Seems done?
- "$28.7" → "$29.8" (source being used)
- Done.
- The numbers on the sentence starting with "The top openings" does not match the numbers from the closest reference.
Critical response
[edit]- Wikilink Kenneth Turan, Manohla Dargis, Joe Morgenstern, Justin Chang, Christopher Orr (film critic), Mark Feeney, and Mark Kermode.
- The sentence ending with "wrote Justin Chang of Variety" does not sound Wikipedia-ish.
- Two of these have been cleared up. GeraldWL 12:15, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Accolades
[edit]- Several award ceremonies are missing sources.
- I would suggest adding a references column per consistency with other GA-articles.
References
[edit]- /Film → /Film
- SlashFilm → /Film
- Already done Chompy Ace 02:35, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- Voice → The Village Voice
- Already done Chompy Ace 02:35, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- Den of Geek! → "Den of Geek"
- Collider.com → Collider
- Variety.com → Variety
- Already done Chompy Ace 02:37, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- The Los Angeles Times → Los Angeles Times
- The reference after "story first" is from The Guardian, not The Observer.
- The reference in #Accolades for the Golden Reel Awards should not be in all caps.
- Till here, done.
- I don't think "stitchkingdom.com"/"Stitch Kingdom", is a reliable source so I would find a replacement.
- Partly done the cast section says the note should be consistent with the sources. Chompy Ace 02:30, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- References should be properly cited and shouldn't include the Wayback Machine template.
- Will resolve these two later.
- Mark references from Los Angeles Times with the "|url-access=limited" parameter.
- Mark references from The Atlantic with the "|url-access=limited" parameter.
- Mark references from The New York Times with the "|url-access=limited" parameter.
- Mark references from The Washington Post with the "|url-access=limited" parameter.
- Till here, done.
- Mark references from South China Morning Post with the "|url-access=subscription" parameter.
- I don't see any SCMPs.
- Mark references from The Wall Street Journal with the "|url-access=subscription" parameter.
- Already done Chompy Ace 02:37, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
- In the reference in #Music after "directed by Peterson", remove "| Film Music Reporter" from the title and add the website parameter.
- Done.
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