Talk:The Girl Reporter/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:00, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
Another GA sweep JAGUAR 21:00, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
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[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
- Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise
- "The film follows two sweethearts" - a bit informal? How about "lovers"
- "The film was also shown by the Province Theatre of Vancouver, British Columbia in Canada" - better to shorten to Vancouver, Canada or British Columbia
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Another part of the 1910 sweep done JAGUAR 15:06, 3 June 2015 (UTC)