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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 19:22, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Taking over this one as well. Here are my comments:

  • "The idea for the character of "Mr. Lovewell" and the album while trying to figure out concepts for the record." missing a couple words here. Perhaps ...and the album came up while trying...
    • Done'
  • "The song spent 10 weeks at the number 1 spot" at the top spot reads a bit better, but not picky on that one.
    • Good catch, corrected

Just a couple small things. I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:22, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:51, 25 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]