Talk:The Funeral of the Anarchist Galli/GA1
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Reviewer: Ganesha811 (talk · contribs) 10:32, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Hello! I'm happy to review this article. Sorry for the long wait! I'll be using the template below. —Ganesha811 (talk) 10:32, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. |
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
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Reply:
- FN 3, The Art Story, is a nonprofit company that does descriptions/histories on art pieces. A cursory glance shows me that its very widely used on other pages here and the list of the contributors can be found here. The page, in a few places, states the info is vetted by doctorate-level professionals and I've found a few limited indications that the site is used for university-level art history cources. I would argue that it meets WP:RELIABLE. Etrius ( Us) 19:06, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- I'm willing to accept that, though I would prefer specific contributors to the Futurism article be listed. Given that this is GA, it won't hold the article back from passing, but I still recommend finding a different, peer-reviewed history of Futurism to source the information used. —Ganesha811 (talk) 19:37, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- I removed the study image since it can't be on commons. I nomed the commons page for deletion but am hoping to keep it as a file on en wiki. Will re-add when the move has been made. I replaced it with carra's image for now. Etrius ( Us) 19:06, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Looks good, feel free to re-add as appropriate. —Ganesha811 (talk) 19:37, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- I expanded out the history and the poem. I don't like using libcom.org but the author has enough qualifications to overcome reliability issues. Interestingly, the claim that he died in 1904 is widely cited but incorrect. Carra misattributed the death in his autobiography, with some sources claiming it was done to bolster his own credibility since the general strike of 1904 was a far more famous event. I also expanded the poem's context, and added an external link to an archived version. That should be everything, I'll archive the added sources. Etrius ( Us) 21:23, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- We're looking good! Doing a final check now. —Ganesha811 (talk) 23:59, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- This now meets the GA standard and passes. Congrats to you and anyone else who worked on the article! —Ganesha811 (talk) 00:01, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
- We're looking good! Doing a final check now. —Ganesha811 (talk) 23:59, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.