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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:15, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:15, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Add a non-free use rationale to the image.
- Runtime needs a reference (per the template).
- Other genres also need a source (per the template).
- Add a link to the episode list with the "| list_episodes =" parameter.
- "late night" → "late-night"
- Remove the commas after "Wah! Mikey Returns" and "Oh! Mikey Fever".
- "four more series, including the 2007 theatrical film Oh! Mikey Fever was released direct-to-DVD." → "four more series and the 2007 theatrical film Oh! Mikey Fever were released direct-to-DVD."
- "news of the series were" → "news of the series was"
- Done except for the image; I didn't upload the original image and I will look into adding non-free use rationale later. lullabying (talk) 22:37, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Done: non-free image nationale added. lullabying (talk) 05:16, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
Overview
[edit]- "at real-time" → "in real-time"
- "includes surreal" → "include surreal"
- "a non-continuous storylines" → "a non-continuous storyline" or "non-continuous storylines"
Characters
[edit]- "betrothe" → "betroth" or "betrothed"
- "is transfer student" → "is a transfer student"
Production
[edit]- "hair stylist" → "hairstylist"
- "late night" → "late-night"
- "in the 54th" → "at the 54th"
- Add commas after "January 24, 2004", "December 3, 2010", and "December 20, 2005".
- "Afterwards" → "Afterward"
- "at 28th Hong" → "at the 28th Hong"
- "preview to" → "preview of"
- "vols. 1-3 were released" → "vols. 1-3 was released"
Episodes and films
[edit]- Both of these sections look good.
Legacy
[edit]- Add commas after "December 20, 2007" and "December 11, 2004".
- "photo shoot" → "photoshoot"
Reception
[edit]- Add a subsection under the header titled "Critical response", and make #Awards_and_accolades a subsection under that.
- "received mixed reception" → "received a mixed reception" or "received mixed responses"
- Remove the comma after "cross-cultural commentary".
- as "wacky weird ride" → as a "wacky weird ride"
- For the awards table, add a references column with centered citations (example).
- Done with the exception of adding a reference column to the awards table, as I will do so later. lullabying (talk) 23:00, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Done Reference column added. lullabying (talk) 23:01, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Done with the exception of adding a reference column to the awards table, as I will do so later. lullabying (talk) 23:00, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Citations are archived.
- Optional, but it would be helpful to readers if you linked websites.
- Which websites should I link? lullabying (talk) 05:16, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
- In general, all of them, but my other suggestions have been addressed, so I'll be passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:36, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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