Talk:The Fight (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 16:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
Quality of article is good.

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
~~See comment section below.~~ Article now complies with MoS.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:
This section is good.

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
References are included where needed.

C. No original research:
No original research found.
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
Major aspects of the topic are covered.

B. Focused:
The article remains focused throughout.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
No bias found.
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Article is stable.
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
All tags on the images within the article are tagged properly. Infobox picture has a fair use rationale.

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Images are provided where possible and the captions are suitable.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
~~See comment section below.~~Pass!

Comments

"At the end of the day, Michael promotes Dwight from Assistant to the Regional Manager to Assistant Regional Manager", I don't understand what you are trying to say. Can you please clarify?

"Eventually, she vented her frustration by "practically knock[ing]", whats the need of the "ing" in hard brackets?

The article will be on hold for 7 days. If you have any questions feel free to post them here or on my talk page.--Dom497 (talk) 18:25, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I tried to clear up the first issue. It's rather hard to explain in words, but basically Dwight is "Assistant to the Regional Manager", ie a personal assistant. He dreams of being "Assistant Regional Manager", which is the second in command at the branch. Although the titles are similar, they are vastly different, and there's a lot of jokes about Dwight saying he's Assistant Regional Manager, when he's really just "Assistant to the Regional Manager". As for the second one, I put it in brackets because the original quote was "practically knocked", which didn't fit in with the grammar of the reworded sentence. Hope that helps!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:19, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Makes sense.--Dom497 (talk) 23:53, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]