Talk:The Earth Is Not a Cold Dead Place/GA1
GA Review
[edit]| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:52, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "Forming in Austin, Texas in" I don't like this, you mean the band formed in 1999? And comma after Texas. Or you could say "After forming..."?
- Addressed. Roniiustalk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- Lead is brief. Anything about the style of the album or the critical/sales reception?
- Addressed. Roniiustalk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- Producer is noted in the infobox but he is not referred to as producer in the article itself?
- Added to article body. Roniiustalk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- "formed in 1999 in Austin, Texas, forming" formed ... forming.
- "All the tracks on The Earth Is Not a Cold Dead Place do not have" -> "None of the tracks .... have ..."
- "2000 - the " en-dash, not hyphen.
- "scholars of post-September 11 music Fisher and Flota" I'm not sure I understand, are these people? Do they have first names? Does "September 11 music" mean stuff related to 9/11 or just any music anywhere recorded after 9/11?
- Added first names. Changed to "September 11-related music". Roniiustalk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- "times... and" non-breaking space before the ellipsis.
- Check online source titles, no spaced hyphens -> spaced en-dashes please. And same comment on ellipsis applies there too.
- Added en dashes. Ellipsis not added because not in original title. Roniiustalk to me 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- Where is "Bella Union BELLACD55" referenced?
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:47, 4 October 2021 (UTC)