Talk:The Deal (Seinfeld)/GA1

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Hey Music. Pretty interesting article, with only a few concerns... — Hunter Kahn 18:56, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

• From the Plot section: "When Jerry's neighbour Kramer (Michael Richards) gives Elaine a bench, which she is much more grateful for, she and Jerry talk over their agreement." Could you expand this a little. I think somebody reading this who had not seen the episode would be confused. Why would he get her a bench, and why would that make them discussion their arrangement?
• Under the Production section, the photo caption reads: "Larry David wrote the episode, based on a personal experience." Could you add a bit of context to the caption as to who exactly Larry Davis is, in relation to this show?
• Could you add the fact that it received an Emmy nomination to the lead section of the article?

That's about it! — Hunter Kahn 18:56, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

Hey man. Fixed your issues.--Music26/11 17:20, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

A good article is:

1. Well-written: Prose is good, MOS is good.
2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources are good, no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage: Covers main aspects, no unneeded detail.
4. Neutral: Yes.
5. Stable: Yes.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by images: Yes.

Nice work, that's a pass. — Hunter Kahn 05:55, 30 January 2010 (UTC)