Talk:The Converted Deacon

The Converted Deacon has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: May 29, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Converted Deacon/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:30, 29 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll another one again if you don't mind! JAGUAR 15:30, 29 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
I would recommend cutting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD

Why is "Independent" capitalised in the lead?

"Though the reviewer in the The New York Dramatic Mirror however disagreed that the premise was plausible" - I would cut "however" and add a semi-colon at the end before the quote
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

A solid and well researched article with no major problems that would make this to be put on hold. JAGUAR 17:20, 29 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]