Talk:The City of Her Dreams/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:29, 16 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I got to get through this. Continuing the 1910 sweep. JAGUAR 11:29, 16 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD

Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor

The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive

Is the list of people in the production sentence a definite list of people who worked on the film? The lead says otherwise

The names in the Cast section are not in the lead

"Ella's life at her aunt's home is miserable and she dreams of going to New York City" - no need for "she"

"has all money to buy anything which she fancies" - informal, maybe "desires"
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Well researched and well written, once again. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. I am passing this on the grounds of good research. JAGUAR 16:36, 16 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]