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Hey, it's been a while since I've reviewed a good-article nominee. What I see is very good, though :-)

Some preamble

Well-written - Pass; Factually accurate - Pass; Broad - Pass; Neutral - Pass; Stable - Pass; Images - Pass


One thing in the lede, prose-wise:

"The band has been privy to frequent lineup changes."

privy means "allowed to know a secret". You might do some byte-killing and just go for "The band has had frequent lineup changes.", perhaps with a quick note on why the members keep changing.


the quotes "legendary" and "destructive" do not have sources. They need sources, as they're direct quotes. The trick will be to keep the lede from being cluttered with citations, so I suggest moving down to Musical Style.

Reviewer: Xavexgoem (talk) 02:07, 20 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]