Talk:The Case of the Animals versus Man/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 08:52, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Very cool article! I will review over the weekend. --Cerebellum (talk) 08:52, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

My comments:

Lead: is an epistle written by the Brethren of Purity I recommend is an Arabic epistle so readers who don't know who the Brethren of Purity are can quickly place the article in context.
For the second paragraph of Plot, I'm not sure including the Arabic translations of each animal name adds anything. I recommend removing them.
Images: Only one image, fair use rationale provided.
References: Spot checks conducted for #6, 8, and 21. No issues identified, I could not access the other sources.
The article reminded me of medieval debate poetry and Drakht-i Asurig, you could add those to the see also section if you would like.

Other than that I cannot think of anything you should do to improve the article, it is comprehensive and makes great use of a wide range of sources. Well done, I'm happy to pass as GA. Sorry I don't have more for you. If you are looking for extra work to do, I suppose this should have a place in list of rasa'il in the Encyclopedia of the Brethren of Purity ;) --Cerebellum (talk) 11:46, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]